Monday, February 25, 2008

सुनो, मेरी आवाज की साँसे लौटा भी दो ना अब
बेचारी कब से गूंगी बेजान सी छटपटा रही है अपनी रूह को
जो साथ लेते गए हो तुम बैग में पैक कर के सफर को...

3 comments:

Rahul Bajpai said...

excellent writing i must say

could you please type rest of the comment in hindi and revert.

awaaj jo beech thi apne, sath ho li khamoshi ki ungli thaam us shaam,

Sehmi si kone me simti si hamsafar thi or nahin bhi,

maine suni awaaj us khamoshi ki jo saath thi or nahi bhi,

safar ki apni kahani hai...awaaj khamoshi se saath hai lotne ko...

Unknown said...

wah bhi wah. Beautiful........

Kya lihk diya hai aap ne......

I feel lack of words to explain the beauty of these lines.

Shabd kam pad rahea hai......

Anonymous said...

well u tried well.........quite romantic feling of missing someone u love n ought 2 be wid 2gether.......